blog post 3

 How did you take the feedback? What have you worked on since your first sketch? What have you changed? What have you kept the same?

i took the feed back by changing the things that I was told to change and keeping everything else. since my fist sketch I got fid of the picture that went across two games because trying to keep the image aligned was very difficult. Instead I used two different images that were related. using different images would also include more pictures and bring more examples into my magazine. i kept the placemrnt of the text the same.

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